What you published made a bunch of sense. But, consider this, suppose you wrote a catchier title?
I am not suggesting your content is not good, however suppose you added a post title to maybe
get a person's attention? I mean 지나간 삶 ::
fclose, free 어이 없는 실수... is a little boring.
You might glance at Yahoo's front page and note how they create
article headlines to grab people interested.
You might add a related video or a related picture
or two to grab people interested about what you've got to say.
Just my opinion, it might make your posts a little bit more interesting.